Passive voice
1 (basic structure)
Active voice
VS Passive voice
Active voice
In sentences written in the active voice, the subject performs the
action expressed in the verb; the subject acts.
The tiger attacks the boy.
Janice will present her research on Thursday.
Scientists have conducted experiments to test the hypothesis.
Watching a framed, mobile world through a car's windscreen reminds me of watching a movie or TV.
In each example, the subject of the sentence performs the action
expressed in the verb.
Passive voice
In sentences written in the passive voice, the subject receives
the action expressed in the verb; the subject is acted upon. The agent
performing the action may appear in a " by ..." phrase
or may be omitted.
The boy was attacked by the tiger. (Active Voice: The tiger
attacked the boy.)
The research report will be presented by
Janice on Thursday. (Active Voice:
Janice will present the research report on Thursday.
by
scientists ?
Experiments have been conducted
to test the hypothesis. (Active Voice: Scientists have conducted experiments to
test the hypothesis.)
(the
agent performing the action has been omitted)
I am reminded of watching a movie
or TV by watching a framed, mobile world
through a car's windscreen.
(Active voice: Watching a framed, mobile world through a car's
windscreen reminds me of watching a movie or TV.)
When do we use
the passive voice?
We don't necessarily
use the passive voice in writing. Sometimes the use of the passive voice can
create awkward sentences, as in the last example above. Also overuse of the
passive voice throughout a composition can cause your prose to seem flat and
uninteresting.
The base form of the Passive Voice
The base form of the
passive voice is
Verb to be + p.p. (past participle)
e.g. The money is kept
here.
I was expected to visit my
grandmother last Sunday.
A new library will be built
here.
This window is being
repaired.
This cat was given a name
several years ago.
Choosing active voice
Sentences in the active
voice are generally, though not always, clearer and more direct than those in
the passive voice.
Passive (indirect) |
Active (direct) |
The entrance exam was failed by over 50 students. |
Over 50 students failed the
entrance exam. |
Your car has been damaged. (agent omitted) |
I have damaged your car. |
Sentences in the
active voice are also more concise than those in the passive voice because
fewer words are required to express action in the active voice than in the
passive.
Passive (more wordy) |
Active (more concise) |
Action on the bill is being considered by the committee. |
The committee is considering action on the bill. |
By then, the soundtrack will have been completely remixed by the sound engineers. |
By then, the sound engineers will have
completely remixed the soundtrack. |
Changing passive to active
If you want to
change a passive voice sentence to the active voice, find the agent in a 'by ...'
phrase, or consider carefully who or what is performing the action expressed in
the verb. Make that agent the subject of the sentence, and change the verb
accordingly. Sometimes you will need to infer the agent from the surrounding
sentences which provide context.
Passive voice |
Agent |
Changed to Active voice |
The book is being read by most of
the students. |
Most of the students |
Most of the students are reading the book. |
Mistakes were made. |
Agent not specified; most likely agents such as 'we'. |
We made mistakes. |
Choosing the Passive Voice
While the active
voice helps to create clear and direct sentences, sometimes writers find that
using an indirect expression is rhetorically effective in a given situation, so
they choose the passive voice. The passive voice makes sense when the agent
performing the action is obvious, unimportant, or unknown or when a writer
doesn't want to mention the agent until the last part of the sentence or wants
to avoid mentioning the agent at all.
The passive voice is
effective in such circumstances because it highlights the action and what is
acted upon rather than the agent performing the action.
Active |
Passive
|
The doctors successfully performed a
new experimental operation yesterday. |
A
new experimental operation was successfully performed by the doctors yesterday. |
In the above example, the passive voice makes sense because the
agent is relatively unimportant compared to the action itself and what is acted
upon.
Changing active to passive
If you want to
change an active voice sentence to the passive voice, consider carefully who or
what is performing the action expressed in the verb, and then make that agent
the object of a 'by...' phrase. Make what is acted upon the subject of the
sentence, and change the verb to a form of be + past participle. Including an explicit 'by the...' phrase is
optional.
Active voice |
Agent |
Changed
to Passive voice |
The leaders are seeking a fair
resolution to the crisis. |
The leaders |
A fair solution to the crisis is being sought. (by the leaders) |
In the above
example, the passive voice is useful for highlighting the action and what is
acted upon instead of the agent.